This is the most difficult poem to write, because to my cousin who is fighting cancer. ?

Please, if you could improve on this, would be most appreciated, thanks. Its going on a journey through the most turbulent seas, their longing for calm water, the pain of wanting to taste. The storm feels as ominous, you may think that this fight his own family, but the candles with you, so do not always feel alone. For each cloud stretching and darkness in which is the fall, God will bring back the sun and drive safely to shore. With cold gray ashes, will make x

great job. bright indeed. Kudos

Family sailing adventure via french canals to Med