Sailing Poem Funeral

By admin, December 24, 2009 9:06 pm

This poem is rather important… Help?

I am writing a poem for a woman who has just recently lost her second husband. Is this poem good to give someone at a funeral? Is it weird that it is in first person? My friends say it is. Will it just depress her? HELP!

I`ll journey to a place I`ve never been
A place I`ve dreamed of time and time again.
The wind will coax me forth and push me on
When tome has come to be where I belong.
I`ll walk alone to where it is I go
What lies before my feet I do not know.
I`ll sleep beneath the empty skies
With memories for lullabies
And watch the moon arise in yonder dale.
Words were left unspoken
Hearts remained unbroken.
Stories lost or drowned by sorrow
To hear the bell ring in the morrow.
I set a path veiled black by grief
Yet dance upon a pure relief.
I hold no question cold and blind
But onward strive till ends of time
I voyage long that I have yet to sail.

The rest of the poem to be posted momentarily…

I love it. I think it has great imagery. I don’t think it will depress her. I think she will appreciate the fact that you gave something of yourself in such a lovely, personal way. Never fear a positive gift from the heart. You can’t go wrong.

Sailing On The Ships of Heaven – Dale Earnhardt Memorial



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“By Rod Stewart. For piano, voice, and guitar (chords only). Love; Pop; Rock. 5 pages. Published by Hal Leonard – Digital Sheet Music”

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